Welcome Nau mai, haere mai ki tēnei taonga, Kia ora, I am a student at Rāwhiti School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, September 6, 2021
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Hello Luca
ReplyDeleteI like your story and how you used heaps of adjectives to describe what the creature looks like!
Keep up the great work with posting to your blog!
Hello Luca
ReplyDeleteI love your title to your story. What adventures this green luke can get up to especially with wings. It would be very cool to fly around New Zealand in disguise. I imagine having all of those legs you could stay low to the ground, as you crawl and hide on your adventure with your friends. From leanne
hi luca i realy realy like your monstore maybe you shoud add more wirting on the ather side of the papa
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